Ivan

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Posted by 3lpupils | Posted in General News | Posted on 18-06-2015

When i woke up my brother was gone so i run to tell my mum and dad.

They said to  me stop being stupid and go and brush your teeth Ivan.

So in stead i went to look for him by myself.

It was a nasty dirty ugly woods ever.

I found a ice palace so i went in there and i saw my own brother.

Starjik took my brother i should had kown all this time.

He said to me what are you doing here you stupid boy.

I said i am here to say let all the children out of the ice palace.

He done what i said so he became nice.

He let me seep in his ice palace he gave me warm soup and led me the way home.

He said he will not take chidren any more.

 

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Well Done.

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